Relatives




Relatives, there are a few ones who tear your heart in pieces
Every time you trust them and
Love them with all your heart
And, try to get close to them sharing secrets.
They always let you down, proving that -
It is in your own good interest that you have  -
Very little communication with them,  acting happy and good -
Every time you meet them is the best thing to do.
Sometimes it is important that you maintain safe distance.



Comments

  1. Life gets faked all the time.

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  2. are you allowed to use the word in acrostic the way you used in first line it self? may be relation could have been used nai ?

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  3. Well, not always ... sometimes ... yes.


    GBU
    Arti

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  4. Yes, we are allowed to use the title word in the poem. See "Elizabeth" on this page  :)
    Haan, relation bhi use ho sakta tha...


    GBU
    Arti

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  5. Wow!!!!!! Very Well Said :)

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  6. Thank you :)


    GBU
    Arti

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