Autumn Wind



He was like an autumn wind
that came in my life
brushed against my skin
patted my hair
and then...
slipped past
to play with another

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  1. Hi Arti, a short and simple poem but speaks volume. A bit sad though.
    Take care.

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  2. Thank you, Venus.
    Yes, it does have a sad touch to it.



    GBU
    Arti

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  3. loved the poem. :) And hey u hav a really nice template.

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  4. Arti, you must submit this somewhere! It's excellent!

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  5. Thank you, Aurora :)
    Any suggestions / recommendations? 


    GBU
    Arti

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  6. Thanks, Ria and sorry for missing your comment. The comment form I was using did not have record of your comment because perhaps you commented on default blogger comment form before that one could load.


    Well! The template is Blogger Template Minima Black by Douglas :)
    I have simply used a watermark background script :)



    GBU
    Arti

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