If You Can...


If you can, just tell me what would you do
If you were in my shoes and I was you
Would you wake up each day
And promise yourself that all would be fine?
Would you walk to a place you do not wish to go
And tell yourself, you would still do it -
For that is what made me happy?



If you can, just tell me what would you do
If you were in my shoes and I was you
Would you smile the entire day
Hide all your worries and fears
For all I want to see when I return home
Is a face glowing with happiness?
Would you massage my shoulders
Ask me how was my day
Would you care to listen -
Even if you had something important to do?

If you can, just tell me what would you do
If you were in my shoes and I was you
Would you strive all day long
To hear one word of appreciation
Would you give in your everything
To save the relationship that is important only for you?

If you can, just tell me what would you do
If you were in my shoes and I was you!
When you have the answer,
Just look outside, I am waiting for you on the porch
Either come and hand me my bag
Or take me in your arms



A letter from a frustrated wife to her husband
A last attempt to save the relationship, A hope that he would understand

Comments

  1. This reminds Wife is worries invited for ever....

    Anyway, my best wishes too....good attempt, Arti :)

    Happy New Year!

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. wow..awesome arti..that is the irony everyone wants to please everyone but don't what anyone wants :)

    wishes,

    www.simplypoet.com

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  3. Well, she might be what you say but she is definitely more than that...
    Best wishes to? 
    Thanks


    Happy new year to you too
    GBU
    Arti

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  4. Thanks :)

    GBU
    Arti

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  5. Happy New Year to you too, Venus :)


    GBU
    Arti

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  6. This is beautifully, gently, and peacefully expressed, Arti. I love the delicate, wistful touch to this.

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  7. <span style=" line-height: 19px;"><span style="font-weight: normal; text-decoration: none; cursor: pointer; color: #000000; margin-right: 1em;">Arti Honrao<img style="width: 48px; height: 48px; margin-top: 0px; margin-left: 0px;" src="http://js-kit.com/avatar/gxpA99f0jKlohF_DgthroT-48x48.png"/><span>Arti Honrao</span><span style="color: #0066cc; cursor: pointer;">View details</span>Visit me on...TwitterJS-Kit</span><span style="color: #000000;"></span> 
    <span style="padding-top: 4px;">Thank you so much, Aurora. 
    Glad you enjoyed reading it... 
     
    GBU 
    Arti</span></span>

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