Breaking The Silence - The Silent Road - 13




Breaking The Silence - Silent Road - 13

Breaking the silence
I hear someone cry
Somewhere,
Far away from where I am...

I hear the cry
of an aching heart.
The night fills with gloom
Intolerably thick it becomes

With each breath
I smell the sadness of her heart
I blink my eyes
and I taste the salt of her tears
Of the one, who seems to be so far, yet-
So close in my heart


Comments

  1. hey..
    that’s a lovely exercise.. :) even if i wasn’t able to fill out the poem fully, i could sense the feeling that distance brings into your heart.. so far.. but so close at the same time.. very familiar.. for many ppl, i guess..
    about the hidden emotions.. that’s what writing is all about.. to express them at least in this manner.. :)

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  2. Thanks, Sparklet.
    I thought the same about the exercise, but no one even attempted, did not want to let me down, I guess :)

    And yes, about hidden emotions, that's what writing is all about.



    GBU
    Arti

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  3. This is an excellent poem. I also like the way you presented it. I love your handwriting! :)

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  4. Hi Aurora!

    Thank you :)
    I wanted readers to try and find out the missing words in the poem but either no one could or they did not want to try!

    You love my handwriting?
    I am sure, it is nowhere near to yours!



    GBU
    Arti

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  5. Hi Priya!

    Welcome back :)
    and
    Thanks :)



    GBU
    Arti

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  6. Rahul SoniApril 29, 2010

    no words to say after reading it..
    the only thing i can say is
    it made me cry....
    awesome

    if possible mail me at soni_rahul@live.com, i would love to hear from u..

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  7. Arti HonraoApril 29, 2010

    Thank you for your comment, Rahul.


    Keep visiting
    GBU
    Arti

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