He Died Yesterday...




He died yesterday,
because of what I did to him.
But, it would have been wrong,
had I allowed him to live like that...
Used, crushed and ruined.

He was on life support,
since many days ...
thanks to all that I was doing,
making it difficult for him to survive.

I killed him, yes I did.
At least now I hope he rests in peace
He was my innocent companion
He followed me wherever I went,
He was the reason for the smile on my lips
and, sometimes the reason for my tears
He let me deal with people with honesty
and, give my 100% to all and everything.

Trust, he died yesterday...
Because of all the doubts,
Calculations and investigations.
I could not let him live like this,
Used, crushed and ruined.

Comments

  1. as of the poem it is very good...!!!
    but is that ture?? is anything wrong...???
    i hope it is not..!!!

    i wish it to never happen with you....loosing dear ones is a pain and i know how it feels....!!!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Thanks, Yamini.
    This is a poem, which comes out of personal experience ...
    But, it is about lost trust and not some person

    Trust, he died yesterday...
    Because of all the doubts,
    Calculations and investigations.
    I could not let him live like this,
    Used, crushed and ruined.




    GBU
    Arti

    ReplyDelete
  3. ohhhk....
    i was worried if it was a person...and am glad it is not a person..@!!!

    and loosing trust...huh..it is a hell to heart..!!

    the situation am facing now...but my frnds trust me now when my dear world left me alone..so a bit better...!!!

    to know abt my situation...you can check outmy blog..!!!

    ReplyDelete
  4. Many can relate to this poem and I am one of them.
    When TRUST died it is very painful but i always believe in second chance. Take care, Arti.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Yes, losing trust is a very sad thing to happen, Yamini and it hurts but we need to pick up lessons and move ahead in life.

    I did check your blog. Glad that your friends are supportive.
    Take care



    GBU
    Arti

    ReplyDelete
  6. Did not get your mail, Vivek...



    GBU
    Arti

    ReplyDelete
  7. I agree, second chance has to come.
    Thanks, Venus66



    GBU
    Arti

    ReplyDelete
  8. A very powerful write, Arti.

    ReplyDelete
  9. Simply straight from the heart, Aurora.
    Thanks


    GBU
    Arti

    ReplyDelete
  10. No Vivek, I did not get your mail...
    Will get it when you send it :p



    GBU
    Arti

    ReplyDelete
  11. nice lines..and I can understand the trust that you are talking about..it's loss can never be compensated!!

    ReplyDelete
  12. Thanks for understanding, Rahul.
    It is difficult but we can always try, that is what I am doing ...
    Letting go the experience and taking a lesson from it


    GBU
    Arti

    ReplyDelete
  13. Narendra PaiOctober 24, 2009

    its really difficult for me to comment on something that i dont quite support..(euthanasia) then i saw the bold+italiscised TRUST..then i read the comment...sigh of relief....
    a bit tricky to understand..but thats what poems are..if everyone understands them they wont be called poems..correct (i think my hindi teacher used to say this...so u cant use this line..its copyright protected..lol)

    well i want to know something now..how do u determine the gender of words...like trust should be he or she?? i always get confused while using such personifications..

    ReplyDelete
  14. Arti HonraoOctober 26, 2009

    Yes, I understand your views on Euthanasia. 
    If you have seen the labels; the poem is also categorized into venting out.
    It's written out of experience.

    Sure, I will respect the copyright  :-P  will just modify a bit to use 8-)

    To tell you the truth, I never thought about this! The person who broke my trust was "him" so-called-friend so I used the "he"
    Now, you have given me something to think about!


    GBU
    Arti 

    ReplyDelete
  15. Very nice. Was "he" your pet? ...."followed me wherever I went"

    ReplyDelete
  16. Arti HonraoNovember 01, 2009

    No, jess ... I am talking about "Trust" here. :)

    Welcome to Straight From The Heart
    Keep reading


    GBU
    Arti

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

I think I did pretty well, considering I started out with nothing but a bunch of blank paper.

~ Steve Martin