He died yesterday,
because of what I did to him.
But, it would have been wrong,
had I allowed him to live like that...
Used, crushed and ruined.
He was on life support,
since many days ...
thanks to all that I was doing,
making it difficult for him to survive.
I killed him, yes I did.
At least now I hope he rests in peace
He was my innocent companion
He followed me wherever I went,
He was the reason for the smile on my lips
and, sometimes the reason for my tears
He let me deal with people with honesty
and, give my 100% to all and everything.
Trust, he died yesterday...
Because of all the doubts,
Calculations and investigations.
I could not let him live like this,
Used, crushed and ruined.
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as of the poem it is very good...!!!
but is that ture?? is anything wrong...???
i hope it is not..!!!
i wish it to never happen with you....loosing dear ones is a pain and i know how it feels....!!!
Thanks, Yamini.
This is a poem, which comes out of personal experience ...
But, it is about lost trust and not some person
Trust, he died yesterday...
Because of all the doubts,
Calculations and investigations.
I could not let him live like this,
Used, crushed and ruined.
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Arti
ohhhk....
i was worried if it was a person...and am glad it is not a person..@!!!
and loosing trust...huh..it is a hell to heart..!!
the situation am facing now...but my frnds trust me now when my dear world left me alone..so a bit better...!!!
to know abt my situation...you can check outmy blog..!!!
will mail my comment
Many can relate to this poem and I am one of them.
When TRUST died it is very painful but i always believe in second chance. Take care, Arti.
quite strong!!
Yes, losing trust is a very sad thing to happen, Yamini and it hurts but we need to pick up lessons and move ahead in life.
I did check your blog. Glad that your friends are supportive.
Take care
GBU
Arti
Did not get your mail, Vivek...
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Arti
I agree, second chance has to come.
Thanks, Venus66
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Arti
Yes, Sawan.
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Arti
A very powerful write, Arti.
Simply straight from the heart, Aurora.
Thanks
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Arti
OH YOU didnt???
No Vivek, I did not get your mail...
Will get it when you send it :p
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Arti
nice lines..and I can understand the trust that you are talking about..it's loss can never be compensated!!
Thanks for understanding, Rahul.
It is difficult but we can always try, that is what I am doing ...
Letting go the experience and taking a lesson from it
GBU
Arti
its really difficult for me to comment on something that i dont quite support..(euthanasia) then i saw the bold+italiscised TRUST..then i read the comment...sigh of relief....
a bit tricky to understand..but thats what poems are..if everyone understands them they wont be called poems..correct (i think my hindi teacher used to say this...so u cant use this line..its copyright protected..lol)
well i want to know something now..how do u determine the gender of words...like trust should be he or she?? i always get confused while using such personifications..
Yes, I understand your views on Euthanasia.
If you have seen the labels; the poem is also categorized into venting out.
It's written out of experience.
Sure, I will respect the copyright :-P will just modify a bit to use 8-)
To tell you the truth, I never thought about this! The person who broke my trust was "him" so-called-friend so I used the "he"
Now, you have given me something to think about!
GBU
Arti
Very nice. Was "he" your pet? ...."followed me wherever I went"
No, jess ... I am talking about "Trust" here. :)
Welcome to Straight From The Heart
Keep reading
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Arti
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