Human Too



Don't hold on to me
For I am not the one you can rely on
I may make you smile, or even laugh
But there are times when I cry too
Don't depend on me for the smile
Don't depend on me for support
For there are times when
Even I stumble and fall,
Because I am a Human after all!
(Re-published)
New addition:

My shoulders are strong enough;
To hold your head when you cry
My arms are long enough;
To embrace you when you want a hug
But, sometimes -
Just sometimes, my knees would get weak,
The stress of life, the walking on the hard road,
Might make me stumble and fall -
For, I am a Human after all.

Comments

  1. Well said, Arti. I can relate.

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  2. Thanks, Venus :)
    I still remember, when I had posted this for the first time, yours was the first comment like this time!


    *hugs*


    GBU
    Arti

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  3. just beautiful... the addition is so well penned... really straight from the heart...

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  4. Thanks, Rajlakshmi.
    The addition was spontaneous. Once again based on experience :)

    How are you?




    GBU
    Arti

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  5. awesome..the addition makes it even more beautiful!!

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