Incomplete Poem...


I have come a long way
I know,
Because when I look back
I cannot see the people I left behind

I have learned a lot in all these years
I know,
Because I know things I did not know then
Things, which perhaps I should have not known

I have grown up, definitely,
Physiologically and psychologically too...
I know,
Because the mirror reflects a strange face
When I look at it trying to search for the "old" me

I am not sad, perhaps I am happy
Yes, you can say that
Because I am smiling.

There are a lot of things to be said
I know,
Because my fingers are trembling
As I compose this poem
... my first incomplete poem.

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  1. i liked the poem...despite it being incomplete(i dont say that..u say it :) ) but i would have wanted something else instead of "Physiologically and psychologically too..." .... i am sorry just a thought..no offense meant..else everything perfect...the poem looks better with the background..infact i am in love with it.. :) ..it makes things look so much more elegant..and meaningful...

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  2. This poem was written at the spur of the moment. And, is situational.
    Those words were the first ones to come to my mind :D
    Any suggestions?

    Glad you loved it. both the poem and background!

    Keep visiting
    GBU
    Arti

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