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A blank spot
A silent thought
Lots of memories
Untold stories




Aimless wandering
Eyes stinging
The silent havoc
A pleading knock








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  1. simple yet perfect lines...that speak about the silence of heart..!!!

    i hope its juss fantasy...!!

    nicely written dear..!!!

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  2. Nayi foto kya baat hai kya baat hai..
    Dekho mein hass toh bilkul nahi raha.. hasi toh aa hi nahi rahi.. aare bata raha hun na bilkul bhi nahi sachi :P

    aur yeh jo poem hai apne sar k upar se gayi par samjh saari aa gayi.. bahut mast mazza aa gaya kya baat hai.. kya baat hai.. :D ab mein gaya :-ss

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  3. loneliness do have its effect..

    ab aap accha se munda dekho and shadi kar lo :P

    phir happy happy likhna :P

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  4. Just loved the first four lines..!!

    :)

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  5. Thanks, Yamini.
    Yes, it is not real :)



    GBU
    Arti

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  6. Haanji, nayi foto.
    Mainu pata hai, tussi hansne ki himmat to karr hi nahi sakte aku ke saamne!!

    aur yeh jo poem hai apne sar k upar se gayi par samjh saari aa gayi.. bahut mast mazza aa gaya kya baat hai.. kya baat hai..

    Jab bhi blog pe aate ho mujhe hansaake jaate ho, Gabru!



    GBU
    Arti

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  7. These are mere words, Sourish and not necessarily my state of mind!

    Nothing to do with feeling lonely and, need to get married :)


    Thanks,
    GBU
    Arti

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  8. Nice, very nice. will keep visiting this blog from now on. If you remember, I used to blog some two years ago then stopped all of a sudden. Trying to make a comeback and would appreciate if I can get some comments (honest comments) to shake off the rust and lethargy my writing has gained due to such a long gap.

    Siddhartha, pls visit (www.tembesiddhartha.blogspot.com)

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  9. Thanks, Sid
    and,
    Welcome back :)

    I will peek in at your blog soon.


    GBU
    Arti

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  10. didi ..aapko time miley toh mere blog se award collect kar lena :P
    ok ???

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  11. Thanks, Sourish!
    Zarur collect karr lungi.
    aap ke blog pe comment chodna bhi baaki hai, sorry I have not been around for some time, now.

    Peechle kuch din bahut kharaab jaa rahe hain :|



    GBU
    Arti

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  12. Good writing again, Arti
    Knock, the doors will open -said the Bible :)


    wishes,
    devika

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  13. i just read the other comments....don't take my comment wrongly, Arti..

    I have this habit of kidding sometimes...better let you know :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  14. Thanks, Devika
    And, I did not find anything wrong with your earlier comment, relax!



    GBU
    Arti

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  15. amazing lines hain aku bhai...
    more told in less words...

    gbu
    Mannu

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  16. Thanks Mannu bhai!
    Howdy?


    GBU
    Arti

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  17. i went through some of your longer poems... you paint with words... but this small one i like a lot... i'm a minimalist... i like to say a word and imagine two...

    more power to you...

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  18. Thank you, Vinod

    Keep visiting
    GBU
    Arti

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