Nice, very nice. will keep visiting this blog from now on. If you remember, I used to blog some two years ago then stopped all of a sudden. Trying to make a comeback and would appreciate if I can get some comments (honest comments) to shake off the rust and lethargy my writing has gained due to such a long gap.
i went through some of your longer poems... you paint with words... but this small one i like a lot... i'm a minimalist... i like to say a word and imagine two...
simple yet perfect lines...that speak about the silence of heart..!!!
ReplyDeletei hope its juss fantasy...!!
nicely written dear..!!!
Nayi foto kya baat hai kya baat hai..
ReplyDeleteDekho mein hass toh bilkul nahi raha.. hasi toh aa hi nahi rahi.. aare bata raha hun na bilkul bhi nahi sachi :P
aur yeh jo poem hai apne sar k upar se gayi par samjh saari aa gayi.. bahut mast mazza aa gaya kya baat hai.. kya baat hai.. :D ab mein gaya :-ss
loneliness do have its effect..
ReplyDeleteab aap accha se munda dekho and shadi kar lo :P
phir happy happy likhna :P
Just loved the first four lines..!!
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Thanks, Yamini.
ReplyDeleteYes, it is not real :)
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Arti
Haanji, nayi foto.
ReplyDeleteMainu pata hai, tussi hansne ki himmat to karr hi nahi sakte aku ke saamne!!
aur yeh jo poem hai apne sar k upar se gayi par samjh saari aa gayi.. bahut mast mazza aa gaya kya baat hai.. kya baat hai..
Jab bhi blog pe aate ho mujhe hansaake jaate ho, Gabru!
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Arti
These are mere words, Sourish and not necessarily my state of mind!
ReplyDeleteNothing to do with feeling lonely and, need to get married :)
Thanks,
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Arti
Thanks, Vinu!
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Arti
Beautiful Arti.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Venus66!
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Arti
Nice, very nice. will keep visiting this blog from now on. If you remember, I used to blog some two years ago then stopped all of a sudden. Trying to make a comeback and would appreciate if I can get some comments (honest comments) to shake off the rust and lethargy my writing has gained due to such a long gap.
ReplyDeleteSiddhartha, pls visit (www.tembesiddhartha.blogspot.com)
Thanks, Sid
ReplyDeleteand,
Welcome back :)
I will peek in at your blog soon.
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Arti
didi ..aapko time miley toh mere blog se award collect kar lena :P
ReplyDeleteok ???
Thanks, Sourish!
ReplyDeleteZarur collect karr lungi.
aap ke blog pe comment chodna bhi baaki hai, sorry I have not been around for some time, now.
Peechle kuch din bahut kharaab jaa rahe hain :|
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Arti
Good writing again, Arti
ReplyDeleteKnock, the doors will open -said the Bible :)
wishes,
devika
i just read the other comments....don't take my comment wrongly, Arti..
ReplyDeleteI have this habit of kidding sometimes...better let you know :)
wishes,
devika
Thanks, Devika
ReplyDeleteAnd, I did not find anything wrong with your earlier comment, relax!
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Arti
amazing lines hain aku bhai...
ReplyDeletemore told in less words...
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Mannu
Thanks Mannu bhai!
ReplyDeleteHowdy?
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Arti
i went through some of your longer poems... you paint with words... but this small one i like a lot... i'm a minimalist... i like to say a word and imagine two...
ReplyDeletemore power to you...
Thank you, Vinod
ReplyDeleteKeep visiting
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Arti