Secrets Whispered...


A lingering smile on the face
Evidence of the secrets whispered,
An innocent look on the face
trying to conceal the same.

The radiant skin,
the breathlessness
and the shivering
Reveal the feelings
hidden beneath the covers.

The love,
the happiness,
The promises made and kept
Bodies intertwined for few moments,
Souls forever.

Comments

  1. :)

    sometimes smile speaks more than words....an i hope u can understand better now..!!

    Great work friend..!!!

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  2. Interesting....but still thoda jyada complicated tha ...it took me real hard to grasp .... :D

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  3. beautifully penned, Arti :)
    loved it!

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  4. The innocence of first love captured quite beautifully. I like the way that though there's no rhyme, it still feels very poetic..

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  5. Thanks Yamini.
    Yeah, smile speaks more than words ;)


    GBU
    Arti

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  6. Thanks, Sourish.
    Complicated? Ekdam saaf emotions the!

    :D



    GBU
    Arti Di
    P.S. Sidebar updated with award. Comment left on your blog :)

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  7. Thanks, Arslan!

    I like writing free verse :)
    Just straight emotions, simple words ... no need to follow a pattern of rules :)



    GBU
    Arti

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  8. didi...

    wo naa angrezzi thodi meri weak hai..aur ek sath inne compli words sath aate hai toh mujhe apne nana and nani dono yaad aa jate hai..and wo mujhe bahut pyar karte they na so main unki yaadon mein kho jata hoon....and phir poem samajh nhi aati :P


    heheheheheh

    and thanx for coming to my blog...and keeping that award on ur blog too ...shoooooooo shweeet of ya

    *hugz*

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  9. *lol*!
    Sourish, aapki didi compli words kahan use karti hai :p
    It was good to visit your blog after a long time and thanks for the award :)

    It has been a really long time since I visited blogs, just got caught up with a lot of things in life.
    I think I should start my blog hopping now!



    GBU
    Arti

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  10. great work.
    loved it...

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  11. Welcome to Straight from the heart, Amal
    and
    Thank you :)


    Keep visiting
    GBU
    Arti

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  12. Nice poem, Arti :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  13. Very nicely written. Loved the last para esp. And also, the quote above your comment box. Nice work. Keep it up.

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  14. Thanks, Jagjit
    and welcome to Straight From The Heart.


    Keep visiting
    GBU
    Arti

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  15. arti nothing cld better explain the bliss bout love dan dis.!! awsome..!!
    keep smiling..!! O:-)

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  16. Arti HonraoOctober 11, 2009

    Thanks, gurl.
    Glad you liked it.


    Keep visiting
    GBU
    Arti

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  17. Narendra PaiOctober 24, 2009

    bodies for a few minutes..souls interwined forever...what a beautiful line.. :) awesome ending..
    i could never write LOVE poems.. :(

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  18. Narendra PaiOctober 24, 2009

    intertwined i meant....there is no spell check here...i call myself a poet..HUH!! pathetic :P

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  19. Arti HonraoOctober 26, 2009

    Thanks, Narendra.
    You can always try. It's never late.

    GBU
    Arti

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  20. Arti HonraoOctober 26, 2009

    <span style=" line-height: 19px;">*lol* it is OK. Does you browser not show the red curvy line under the word? <span style=""> :-P </span></span>

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